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-[* black] The Apple Watch was revolutionary upon its release, but it seemed to have quite a few minor-update “s” years, until now.
- [* black] Where the first Watch was a mess of layered, glued, awkward components the Series 4 finally seems to be a thoughtful opening experience.
- [* black] [https://daringfireball.net/2018/09/iphone_xs_xr_series_4_apple_watch_event|Gruber] has compared this to the leap in design that the iPhone 4 brought, but we’d go so far as to call this an iPhone 5. A device that knows its priorities, and wants to look as elegant inside as out.
+[* black] The original Apple Watch was revolutionary upon its release, but the yearly updates have been mostly minoruntil now.
+ [* black] Where the first Watch was awkwardly layered together and used too much glue, the Series 4 feels much more thoughtfully laid out.
+ [* black] Apple pundit [https://daringfireball.net/2018/09/iphone_xs_xr_series_4_apple_watch_event|John Gruber] has compared this to the leap in design brought by the iPhone 4, and we might even go a bit further and call it an iPhone 5: a device that knows its priorities, and wants to look as elegant inside as out.
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