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-[* black] The Constellation's lone eye seems to stare pleadingly. Let's hope it doesn't start singing [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OuEN5TjYRCE|"Daisy Bell."|new_window=true]
+[* black] Okay, we asked nicely twice, but the components ''still'' won't budge—time for some aggressive negotiations.
+ [* icon_note] The Constellation's lone eye seems to stare pleadingly. Let's hope it doesn't start singing [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OuEN5TjYRCE|"Daisy Bell."|new_window=true]
[* black] We shuck the (well-rotary-tooled) outer casing and find an inner shell secured with some fiercely-glued screws.
-[* black] We whip that away in short order, and all that's left are the real guts of this sensor.
+[* black] Whipping that away in short order, all that's left are the real guts of this sensor.