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[* black] Peeling up a thin foam layer confirms our suspicions—the motherboard is indeed upside down.
-[* black] Surprisingly, the motherboard also sprawls throughout the entire chassis, resembling some kind of nightmare [https://xkcd.com/724/|Tetris piece|new_window=true].
+[* black] Surprisingly, said motherboard also sprawls throughout the entire chassis, resembling some kind of nightmarish [https://xkcd.com/724/|Tetris piece|new_window=true].
[* black] What's more, there's no sign of connectors for any of the peripheral components.
-[* black] At least the camera bar comes up without any trouble. Maybe we'll find some easily plucked treasure below.
+[* black] At least the camera bar comes up without any trouble. Maybe we'll find some tasty treasure below.