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-[* black] The colors, Duke! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iavURrznqjQ|The colors!|new_window=true]
- [* black] We got up-close and personal with the a few of the (over 9 million) pixels of the 4K IPS display. Each is made up of a red, green, and blue strip—vary those and you get a colored pixel.
-[* black] As pleased as we are to see our logo on the new 4K display, we briefly turn our attention to the ~~[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Port_and_starboard|port side|new_window=true]~~ rear of the new iMac.
+[* black] As tempted as we are to play with the new Magic things, we briefly turn our attention to the ~~[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Port_and_starboard|port side|new_window=true]~~ rear of this refreshed iMac.
[* black] The ports on the rear: headphone jack, SD card slot, four USB 3.0, two Thunderbolt 2, and gigabit ethernet.
-[* red] Despite the spec bump and the addition of a 4K display, this new iMac keeps the standard 21.5" model number, A1418 and adopts a new EMC number: 2889.
+[* red] This iteration iMac keeps the standard 21.5" model number, A1418 but adopts a new EMC number: 2889.

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