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[* black] It looks like this year's edition has lost it's cool—here is only one fan compared to last year's two.
-[* black] It seems the Apple is getting in the holiday season by producing devices, shuffling the decorations, and reciting the classic holiday warning [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0085334/|"you'll shoot your eye out"]
+[* black] It seems the Apple is getting in the holiday season by producing devices, shuffling the decorations, and reciting the classic holiday warning [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0085334/|"you'll shoot your eye out"].
+[* black] The new decor features different positions on the cabling, Flash storage in place of the fan, and two extra battery cells.