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[* black] Apple kindly included a retractable post for "the loop" that comes with your iPod.
-[* black] With any luck this loop will help keep iPods from the unintended drop test that results shattered hopes and screens.
+[* black] With any luck, this loop will prevent the unintentional iPod "drop test" that often results in shattered hopes and screens.